poetry is magical!

I have tons of poetry in Urdu and Hindi.have attempted some translations too.

For my own writings Pls check http://aahang.wordpress.com/category/by-aahang/

Let me know your feedback.

Hi Rajnish,

Thanx for your impormptu response.

I have checked your blog and your poems are refreshing.

Please visit my blog http://rachana-myopenspace.blogspot.com/ and let me know your feedback and suggetsions for improvement.

Thanks,

Rachana

i read your poems I liked the one below.I feel you should give more thought on expression than the rhyming.Sometimes it takes the essence away.For beginners like us it s agood effort.

Thanks Rajnish for your valauble feedback. I will try to put more efforts on expression on thoughts.

Hi Khushi,

Your poems are evry meaningful and nicely written.

Please stop by my blog, read my lines and leave your feedback.

Thanks,

Rachana

I'm not totally at wrong place. I write poetry in Telugu  

Hi Sriharsha,

oops! I can't read Teluga but would to hear the hidden meaning of your poems either in hindi or english...

Thanks,

Rachana

I write in bengali.

But can check some of my short english poems @ http://suvrocomposition.blogspot.com/

Let me know if you write too.

Hi Suvro,

I write in Hindi. you can check my poems at my blog http://rachana-myopenspace.blogspot.com/

Regards,

Rachana

Hi Shas,

Thanx for reading my work and appreciating them.

Even, I have started writing only 15 days back, but I know I have found a way to say out loud.

My best wishes to the poet in you.

Regards,

Rachana

Thanks Rachana.

Wish you the same.

Hi rachana,

Indeed some good writings , I like the way you think and theres immense potential to improve ... but it would only come with more and more writing ... so keep doing it ...

And do visit my blog too ... even I write poems and some short stories too ... You'll have to go back some posts to see the poems though ... Its been a while I wrote the last one .... But I hope my other posts will also keep you hooked ...

Regards,

Sunny

Hi Sunny,

Thanx for your comments. I have read your poems, they are very meaningful.

Regards,

Rachana

That was fast ... 15 mins flat ...

good ...

BTW ... which ones did u like ?

..I like reading poetry..can't resist..that's y...

would like to have some of your comments on my post ... I hope you dont mind ....

chale the...i will read that one also...delhi...delhites r not that bad...

Please read Aye Khuda ... I tried it at a different level ... please do read ....

sure...i will...i would expect same from u...comments on my blog...

This is fast ... any faster and this would be yahoo chat ... lol ... that brings me to another question ... Can we like be in touch thru actual chat ... coz we r like talkin really like chatting ... I dont knw if I should be asking this ... but couldn't resist ...  I  hope you wont mind ...

nice poem.. aye khuda...kavi ki koti kalpana...

Thanks ... I dont really understand what 'koti' means ... Can you please tell me ?

sure...I really like your poems...very nice indeed...u can guide me coz I have just started writing...what shud I do to write better?

My Yahoo Id is   thakkar_sunny ... I hope we can get in touch there sometime ... And as far as writing well is concerned ... poems are really what we think ... whats on our mind ... I always prefer to think of a situation before writing ... and then put ourselves there and write what comes to the mind ... rhyming always comes at a later stage ...

oh sorry..it was kori means plain or neat....u have written beautifully...good

You know what, I think the central theme before writing anything..for example, while having a conversation with a friend I answered "kya likhu?" This word striked me and I wrote a poem. But I will try to think your way, a complete situation before writing. Thanx

Hey Rachana,

Hey Rachana,

  You write nice poems.... Check out mine @http://Harikripahai.blogspot.com

Neeraj

Hi Neeraj,

Thank you very much for appreciating my work. Checked ur blog, why don't u write often...keep writing...all the best...thanks,

Rachana

I also write poems in english sometimes..... Find it here and please tell if it's okayish or what??

http://myexperimentswithliesandsins.blogspot.com/search/label/poems

Your poems are good...liked them...keep writing...do visit my blog if you like reading Hindi poems...

The url is http://rachana-myopenspace.blogspot.com

Thanks,

Rachana