Experiment - Keep away!

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago
Read no further, 
I wish you don’t,
You already read the title;
It’s just an experiment,
With some words woven together
And not many metaphors to accompany,
Just shaken, stirred, sampled and put to the litmus test;

Hope you aren’t still reading,
It’s not worth moving a line ahead.
If to kill time is why you’re here,
Turn around and leave or you might regret.
You have a couple more options to contemplate,
Than slay this moment mercilessly by gawking at this page.

STOP! Proceed no further.
You might find no meter or rhyme,
I don’t follow that habitually.
Twists and turns aren’t obvious, not necessarily in every scribble.
Some call it poetry and others free verse;
I still prefer calling it scribbles, please don’t misread me.

You’ve come this far patiently, I insist you retreat.
Perhaps, you don’t pay heed to caution
And make decisions on your own.
So you’ve opted to read the conclusion,
And kill the curiosity before it kills the curious.
‘Reverse psychology works even in a scribble’,
Now, that’s my experiment’s conclusion.
What’s your opinion?
- Scribbler
scribblezpad.blogspot.com 

Hmmm! Now that i have your attention, this is Scribbler here. 
And here's my first post on the forum.
Feel free to comment. Do add in your work / link too.
Would love to read em. Cheers!!

keep it rollin;) 
Edited 15 years ago
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Ravi Lobo
Ravi Lobo
from Wisconsin
15 years ago

Interesting post!

sm
sm
from india
15 years ago

lol

sriharsha

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thank you people for your comments :)

 

@ Sriharsha: As you wish;) 

Parth J Dave
Parth J Dave
from Mumbai
15 years ago

Very interesting experiment, I must say!Smile

Keep up the great work...

 

Regards,

http://parth-dave.blogspot.com

ARJuna
ARJuna
from Mumbai
15 years ago
Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thank you Subhayan, Parth and Arjuna :)

 

IMpressive work on your blog. Will be back for more.

 

keep it rollin;)

 

 

Anand ravichandran
Anand ravichandran
from Chennai
15 years ago

A good attempt ... hoping to see a nice one from you next time ..

www.entrependre.blogspot.com

 

kinnos
kinnos
from Bhubaneswar
15 years ago

when someone asks you to not to do something you do thatWink that's human natureTongue outso I read your whole post though you have posted those don't proceed warnings so many timesEmbarassed nice one scribblerLaughing

http://www.iluvmyfamily.co.cc/blog/

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thank you Anand Ravichandran

Quite an interesting and informative blog.

 

And thank you Kunu

Liked your blog a lot. Very insightful posts.

keep it rollin;)

kinnos
kinnos
from Bhubaneswar
15 years ago

hey scribbler thanks for your encouraging words.Smile I too liked your poems and will like to see more from your pen.keep scribbling :)

http://www.iluvmyfamily.co.cc/blog/

 

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thank you Kunu

keep it rollin;)

Sanjay Vedula
Sanjay Vedula
from Hyderabad
15 years ago

Good one! Added you to my network!

Anoop Zombie
Anoop Zombie
from Bangalore
15 years ago

scribbler :- quick question did you read your post after you read it? Laughing

Anoop Zombie
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Scribbler :- I meant .. did you read your post after you wrote it Laughing

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thanks Sanjay

and Anoop: Not really ;)

Scribbler
Scribbler
from Bangalore
15 years ago

Thank you for the comments Sriharsha

Well, I liked your post on Inner Peace.

I've added it on the 'Recommend a blog' Thread.

Do check it out. And post your fav blog.

 

keep it rollin;)

 


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