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Please Review my blog for mobile.

Yesu Jeya Bensh
Yesu Jeya Bensh
from Chennai
13 years ago

I have the blog for mobiles. i need you to give me the feedback about that blog. Point out the mistakes i have done and the good things i have done. 

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Achyuth Sankar
Achyuth Sankar
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Hi Yesu :)

Okay,firstly,your blog looks great,kudos on that.THe right hand column looks too wide though,and the ads kinda look out of place,it puts readers off.Put them in between posts,few at a time,it'll be better :) You should move your archive to the top though,it seems you;re giving more value to the ads and not the posts,just my view :)

Now,as for the posts themselves,try typing on MS word first,then past it onto the blog,that'll minise the few tiny grammatical errors that I've found.And you introduce the technical aspects too soon.Talk about your experiences with the mobile first,then in the end,give the technical aspects so that after reading your review,the reader can check the specs and make his or her mind up :)

Other than that,awesome blog :)

Arti
Arti
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Nice blog, great reviews...

Though theads can be a bit irritating at times - they are all over the place!!

You can also add the labels and archives section to the sidebar!

Keep blogging:)