Want honest feedbacks for my poems...
Nice poem. Simple words conveying beautiful feelings. Could have ended with a cry for allowing to be reborn, a cry against female infanticide. Keep the good work up.
Hi pooja,
Since you asked for honest feedbacks, thought of giving you one suggestion.
I read your poetry "The day I reborn". The feel in poetry is really good. The message it carries is just awesome.
But, one candid suggestion, before you publish a poem, read it twice or thrice for typo and check for grammatical errors...
And try to use a blank skin at the body of the post, as it is easy for eyes and will not look clustered.
I liked the "mirror" article :)
Poetry comes easily to you, I don't know Hindi, I truly wish I knew, so that I could have read your posts today.
Regards,
Viji
Hi pooja
Read ur poem on the day i reborn. felt good.
one suggestion i would like to make in regard to the appearance is choose a color scheme that is not straining to the eye. that's all. the content is really beautiful.
if u want to read some of my poems here it is
Do post comments at ur leisure...
regards,
Rakesh Rao
Hey Pooja,
Read your poems, it was great. Your thoughts flow nicely...
. When I click on this link http://poojanblogs.com/, it doesn't go to your blog, it goes some search site, I guess....correct me if I am wrong. Only when I click on the blog title it correctly goes to your blogsite (http://poojanblogs.blogspot.com/). So, is it some wrong link you have posted by mistake....??
Regards.
Hello Prashant...
thank you so much for such a kind feedback... the thing is, I buied the domain, but caught some problem later on... and got hacked... so unable to renew it...
n now m unable to change it... :)but thank you so much again... :)
