waiting for your Reviews :)

acidwoman
from Kochi
14 years ago

Hi Sweta,

Belated Happy Birthday to you!

I went through your blog and as I read on, I found the picture in the background to be a little disturbing. But if thats what appeals to you, then dont change it.

Also, I feel the title and the tag line does not get the attention it derserves (probably because of the background).

Thats it from me. Keep blogging

- Acidwoman < http://acidwoman.wordpress.com/  >

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

Thanks alot for the wishes and the review.

the background has been changed yesterday only on a trial basic :)

I will change the backgroung for sure as many feel its disturbing.

wanted to know your view about writting style and let me know if you have any other comments.

Thanks,

Sweta

acidwoman
from Kochi
14 years ago

I dont know if I am that well placed to comment about your writing style. I felt it was easy and effortless and can be safely called 'contemporary', as this is teh style most youngsters use.

I dont have any other comments, as of now. Will let you know if I do, though.

Happy blogging!

- Acidwoman <http://acidwoman.wordpress.com/ >

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

Thanks alot for the efforts

 

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

After Acid woman no one reviewed my blog

Looks like everyone is very busy nowdays...

Dr Roshan R
from Kannur
14 years ago

I really liked the blog.. Its a hell of a lot neater than mine, for starters :) The writing too is something I identify with.. Don't wanna irritate u on the same point but I found the background a bit dull ( Please note - I'm a psychedelic colours kinda guy myself so quite possible my fault ) Anyway, since ur on blogger, Here's a link to try : http://draft.blogger.com/home Allows for lots and lots of variations to the background..if ur interested. All in all, a good blog.. looking forward to more posts :) If time permits do review my blog too http://www.indiblogger.in/forum/topic.php?id=4403 Thanks Dr Roshan

Vasu
from Basel, Switzerland
14 years ago

Hi Sweta,

Read a few blogs and liked it. You have kept the layout and writing simple & the fonts big :)

That sounds basic, but a lot of people don't follow it.

Will bookmark.

Cheers!

Vasu

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

Thanks Dr.Roshan and Vasu for your reviews.

I have kept the layout simple and basic as some of my readers get irritated by background images, even i like the flashy colored background so i ll surely work on it.

And Dr.Roshan, no need of time's permission to read your blog,I am already a follower of you blog and i love it

Thanks,

Sweta

Rakshit Barma
from Hyderabad
14 years ago

Hey Sweta, nice blog. Love the no-nonsense title - Sugarfree. Nice flowing language, makes good for lazy reading. One thing I would like to catalyze your thoughts on is your target audience and the niche you want to focus more on with your content as your blog starts to grow.

Overall an awesome job. Keep'em coming! :]

-R 

Sundaram
from Hyderabad
14 years ago

HI Sweta,

read your blog. I found it to be quite simple and easy to understand. you have conveyed what you wanted to say very lucidly. I am not so much into backgrounds, as long as it isnt black or something that hurts my eyes, I guess that's fine.

Couple of things to add. You have your tenses mixed up here and there. A little more attention to Grammar is needed. Rest, take rak****'s advice and u shd be on course.

Cheers n all the best!!

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

Thanks Rak**** and Sundaram for your feedback

Sundaram, I will surely work more on my grammar.

Rak****, I will keep your point in mind from here on.

Thanks,

Sweta

Parwathi. S. Hegde
from Bangalore
14 years ago

Hi Swetha... you are a pretty good writer... I added your blog to my bookmark.. and will read as and when possible... also foud you a good story teller...

Keep it up.

cheers!!

sweta tiwary
from bangalore
14 years ago

Thank you so much Parwathi

Jayendra Sharan
from Jamshedpur
13 years ago

Nice blog...

Will be looking for your next,

You can check out mine @

http://jayendrashara.wordpress.com

genobz
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Hi Shweta. I read the comments above as well.

As for your 'No one reviews my blog', probably people can't find anything to suggest to you.

and your new background, It suits your blog very well. :)

But still, i have managed to find 3 suggestions which might be useful- 

• First, the subtitle to your blog begins as 'It’s not bitter as its Sugarfree not Sugarless'. Eh, i think it is grammatically incorrect. You might wanna correct that.
• The bullets and text in the 'Popular sugarfree' are overlapping.
• I suggest you use Creative Commons License instead of Copyscape as it is more widely used.

Liked ur 55 Fiction. Have subscribed to your posts via RSS.

Pls review mine as well - HERE

Satish Mutatkar
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Read your last two posts. The 6 word story was great. It is tough to make first person accounts interesting but you have managed it with your wedding blog. Congrats, both for the werdding and the blog post.

Check out my stuff when you can at: http://satish-oneeyeclosed.blogspot.com/

The Bollywod Matrimonial was popular with young girls and given your present 'status' might resonate with you :)