Please review my blog
Abhivyanjana is a personal blog for my poetry. The title of the blog, Abhivyanjana means expression in hindi. Same goes with the blog. In this blog all I've done is expressed my emotions and opinions. These are my expressions in words. I've started writing recently, that is why couldn't write much of it because I write, when something tells me from inside. So please review my blog as that would inspire me to post more on the blog rather than to stay in my notebook.
Hi Piyush,
You have a very nice blog. I couldn't find much to review as it is simple and straightforward.
My suggestion to you- Use more of the alankaars (atishayokti, anupraas, yamak, shlesh, upma etc) in your poems to make it even more amazing.. and it will pose you a challenge too.
All the best :)
thank you sagar. actually i was already expecting such review coz i too know that i need to use such figure of speech. I am working on that and will surely improve.
