review my blog of feelings filled within n giv ur valuable feedback
its all about me,you,we and us...... some of many feelings we encounter...... especially love , friendship,ego,innocence...and many more....discover all these through the short stories i posted in my blog. 
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hey hi Kavya,
gone through you short stories.. especially the latest one.. I really enjoyed it.
You can be more clear when you introduce the characters and the way how you deal during conversation.
You can add about the feelings around, the scenarios which took place. be humorous and will be nice going.
If i was harsh i am sorry.. but take only those comments which you feel so and rest discard away.
Would be glad if you would review my blogs too..
www.shivprasad123.wordpress.com
Keep writing and happy blogging..
Regards,
Shiv
