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dikshal.sangoi
dikshal.sangoi
from mumbai
11 years ago

hi,

i wish to know if my writing style and the topics i select are interesting or plain boring.

i normally write on topics that touch my heart but wish to write a little professionally too.

give me some tips.

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dikshal.sangoi
dikshal.sangoi
from mumbai
11 years ago

Thank you for the feedback Sorcerer.

Shivprasad Murkibhavi
Shivprasad Murkibhavi
from Belgaum
11 years ago

hey hi dikshal.. i hope you doing fine..

Now whenever you write something.. Go and have a look at it, as  a prespective of a reader. Find those flaws, which cause an unknown reader to know about.

Be clear and precise in your thoughts which your trying to express it.

Make shorter paragraphs, which will be helpful for the reader.

The punctuations, adjactives etc, do have a careful look at it.

Now always remember to take only those comments, which you feel so that you can improve. rest all discard it.

You have fresh thoughts, which do pass on daily basis unnoticed and nice to see that the flow of your blogs are good.

I feel blogging world, not only helps you in sharing your thoughts, but also helps to improvise on ones writing.

Always do visit other blogs, which you are intrested in, and try to capture the style, the thoughts of those writers.

Well if i was harsh, then i am sorry. In all please don't take it adversly. You keep on giving your best and keep on writing

Happy blogging..

 

Regards,

Shiv