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On meetrishi, I would add an additional space between your paragraphs when posting future blogs. It makes it easier to read. Also, add some additional following methods using the blogger gadgets available. It will give more readers a chance to follow you the way they prefer instead of making blogger accounts if they don't have one. I like your writing style and voice (word choices).

Poetry is not my thing so I'm going to leave that one to the poetry ppl!

Thank You Kristy.. I will keep your suggestions in mind and try to incorporate them.