Review of My Blog

Thanks Khushi.

By the way, I went though your blog. It is amazing :)

Keep writing.

thanks for visiting my blog..

A very patriotic blog. Liked it

Hi Aamjunta!

You have an eye for detail and patience for description. I was just thinking.. that is what people like Chetan Bhagat and Vikas Swarup have. Unfortunately the incidents in their stories are out-of-the blue and very stretched - even though the atmosphere setting is realistic.

So here is a thought., maybe you can write realistic stories. Currently these are written in regional Indian languages. The incidents are simple and realistic and the insights are profound. Say like that Mrinal Sen movie about a kid and a blanket..

A word to the wise...

Thanks Namita and Satyask for your encouraging words.

@Satyask: Your blog is unique. Quite informative. Keep writing.

@Namita: The photos of your blog are superb. Narration along with the photos makes it interesting. Keep writing.

A nice and neat blog - easy to read and navigate and you use your keen eye for detail quite well...

Cheers!

http://notapennyformythoughts.blogspot.com/ 

Thanks a lot Kadambri and Roshmi.

@Kadambri: Yes, your suggestions are quite valid. I'll try to post part-by-part. Some times it is becomig impossible to cut also, as getting a logical division is difficult. Thanks again.

nice blog aamjunta... read 'glimpses of india' n i tinks its pretty impressive and m sure d judges at the competition were impressed too!!

happy blogging

Tangerine

dada,

aap ke blog ke to hum fan hain!!  isse zyada aur kya review karna!!

Vinay

Thanks Tangerine and Vinay.

@Tangerine: No, that essay could not impress the judges :( Aamjunta ki baat koi sunta nahini hai..

@Vinay: Aap ne to flat kar diya :) Thinking of writing a book on Aamjunta. That is the reason, I want some reviews..

Read your post on saving the train passenger. Hats off to you for having the presence of mind and the ability to have saved him. At the same time, you ought to realise that you were endangering yourself in the process. I do hope and pray that you will take care...

Narendranath

Thanks Narendra... Just wanted to create the awareness among the people.

One of the best blogs I have visited

Thanks a lot Vijay.

Very nice stories indeed. I read 2 posts from your blog: Tyre Kharido, Car fee and Better late Than Never. I like they way you present them. The posts are varied in nature and bring out your keen sense of observation of daily incidents.

The first post has a quite attention grabbing title 'Tyre Kahrido.. '. Loved the way you build the second paragraph on conditions apply. You are a master of the craft. Then you followed up with few more examples and what effect they had on you, finally ending with some sage advice for readers.

The 'Better Late...'  started with a great context setting. Then you introduced sudden suspense, alarm and action. Went on to describe the character of the gentleman who fell down and then the completed it with his words of wisdom.

You are a gifted writer. You know how to tell the stories well. Savoured your posts immensely and will come back to read more.

Brajadulal

Thanks a lot Brajadulala for your review, comments and compliments.