I am aspiring writer and publisher looking for some reviews both critical and ap

this is my blog link : http://monkavantgarde.blogspot.com/

thanks a lot Jaidev and yeah bro i agree that the recent stories lack the flow i was not able to give them enough time 

this was the first one that  i wrote and perhaps so far the one with the best flow 

http://monkavantgarde.blogspot.com/2010/02/hey-how-are-you-sweets-i-asked.html  

after this i tried to be technical sound but i guess in the process flow got lost

Great Blog bro :) 

The look is very professional 

Space is very optimally utilized :) 

though didnt read a lot of posts but the ones i read have great qaulity content 

Over an awesomely managed blog with purpose :)