REVIEW PLEASE
Hi there (whoever will review this),
My blog is my small space on huge www to keep ma thoughts, things which fasinates me, things which i like to read ,see... So it is personal blog and I wud love to get some feedback on it + suggestions (I will think twice before i implement) but wud love to get them
You love to get them, we love to give them:
- Is this stuff original? This thing - Said a blade of grass to an ..... pulls up 1000 exact matches on google. lol. I dont know what it's doing on your blog.
- There seems to be no these or idea behind the blog... at some places there are pictures... some copied stuff... some original half paras etc... It would be a great idea if you tell us what exactly this blog is about.
- There are far too many grammatical mistakes... you may want to pay more attention to grammar. Example... in the post 'whatever', there are huge loads of mistakes.
- There isnt much to take away from your blog. I have been here for 10 minutes and have not found a single thing to take away with me. I guess you need to work on the content as well.
- My main suggestion would be to ask yourself the purpose of this blog... and then align your writeups to that purpose.
- Overall, lot of improvement required.
hey K****ij,
thnx forthe visit and a real eye-opener...as far originlaity is concerned stuff which came from ma dumb head are labelled under My Random Line and for rest the author or sources name is mentioned (including "blade of grass"). I have know claims on their creation. Its there just coz i like them.
Central idea of me having this blog was to have my personal space where I can put thingz I like over internet n nothing else.
Grammer part, I agree, totally my bad, I am never in senses while putting those crap load there.
As from the blog's organization you might have observed I am an unorganized prudish fool, can't expect much from me. BUT THANX FOR SUGGESTIONS ANYWAY :) I am happily surprised to see such a prompt reaction.
Cheerz,
KAPIL
Hey Kapil, I went through some of the posts and found them to be profound and moving. Like you have admitted above, you have taken a few from some sources. From now on, do that less. With the kind of thinking and vocabulary you show, you could be the 'Kapil Dev' of blogging :)happy writing.