Rotten tomatoes ??

Hey,

Here's my take:

- You seem to be writing about your activities, routine etc. Although it does provide interesting reads at times, it may not be preferred by everyone. People, these days, do NOT want to know what you did and what you did not. You might want to consider moving yourself away and giving a different take on life. Please pick up different subjects from life if you want readers. If you perceive your blog as a vent to describing your routine... please avoid my suggestion :)

- You are not showing any respect for punctuation marks. Readers don't like that. For example, there is space before ? and there is no capitalization and comma use is not proper etc. I suggest you give a little more importance to punctuation.

- The reaction thing you have put at the bottom is not working. You may want to consider stalling it for sometime... before you get good audience.

- What purpose is the live traffic feed solving? Give me 1 good reason it should be there :) Btw... i like the hinglish text there... I love that usage. You will find it all over my blogs.

- Color scheme is nice. Content needs more effort.

That's all I can think of.

Thanks... K****ij

http://dusht-ka-drishtikone.blogspot.com/

http://mitti-ka-sher.blogspot.com/?zx=c54df66266df8625

Hey K****ij,

Thanks a lot for taking the time out to go through my blog and for your valuable feedback. Hope to improve on the same in time :)