Looking for feedback on my blog. I cover everything from poems to short stories

Picture this- You are dead tired after a long day, your muscles ache badly, your head is ready to burst in a moment's notice (stress is a ticking time bomb after all), your neck is taut with stress, and suddenly your spine says, “I surrender". Now, if at this very moment, a warm, cozy bed were to magically appear in front of you, how would you feel? That is the exact same way I feel about writing. It is a constant source of escapism from the banal life that I lead. I like to write, I make mistakes, I love to correct my mistakes. So I am open to criticism and suggestions.