Requesting a thorough review of my Blog.
My blog 'Brandy, Whiskey & all that...' is a personal, political, literary and social blog that I began writing as a medium to showcase my writing and to seek opinion about the issues that arose from time to time in my curious head.
It has now been eight months that I began writing on this platform and before now I haven't had the opportunity to ask for a review. However, here I am now and I'd like to know what my readers think of my work.
I'd prefer as thorough a review as one possibly can give me. Point to any and all mistakes, refer changes, criticize opinions, and well I prefer as much of a scrubbing as my readers can possibly dish out, in order that I might come out the shinier at the other end.
Go for it...
Reason: Lack of replies.
Hey,
First off, the contrast of black and orange hit me quite hard for the first 10 seconds but then your posts took over. Liked the fact that you have grouped all the followers, indirank, email and other stuff at the bottom. The posts are good. Keep up the good work.
PS- Do check out my blog as well. :)
Thank you Vishwas,
I guess the black and orange is a bit much when you think about it. Glad you glad the the widget arrangement. And glad you liked my work.
Will try to get the colour thing. Wil check out your blog.
Your writing is sharp and insightful but you should pay more attention to your punctuation and grammar - your sentences are sometimes convoluted and it gets hard to keep track of your thought. Also, your blog can do with less clutter and less dramatic contrast. I'd advise you to go easy on the colours... Too bright and loud.
Thank you, glad you liked the writing. Well, about the convolution, it's how i think. i feel that it will lose its essence if I edit it too much.
However the colour is certainly an issue. I'll work towards it, thanks.
