Please review my stories

I am an aspiring writer whose grammar will definitely offend you. Trust me, I am working on that part very hard. As hard as a sloth works after hanging from a tree. Exactly 

That apart, I write and I write because stories need no passport, no visa, no verification to travel. They can touch a million heart without actually traveling, and that's so unique about them. At any point my mind is weaving a million thoughts and finally, I decided to pour them on paper. Oops! Computer.

I write at bagofbrains.wordpress.com Until now, I have published one complete story Oceanus Amoris and on the verge of finishing - It happened one night. I invite all of you to read my work, suggest me, critique me and above all motivate me. I am no Tagore or Premchand, but I promise to work hard and improve. I wish to publish one day but as of now Dilli durr hai 

Do guide me and write back to me personally at bagofbrains@yahoo.com. I guarantee a reply at the earliest. Am very good at that.

Love you friends,

GG