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As I lay myself down on the green grassWith closed eyes and wide open armsLetting green grass stroke my skinKissing the pores of my body like a pinMaking my mind relax Exhaling all ruthless from my soulThe one which tormented the sync between intellect and love for sureI surrendered myself to the power up aboveMy belief trifle between my intellect and loveI had a beautiful conversation in my mind which I cannot rub because it is guidance from divineLove says: people come into your life for a reason to teach you something, sometimes to take away the lessonsIntellect says: there is no divine love between those who chose to leave you. Do not listen to love because it will only break youLove says I existed at the time you have been tested and I still exist in youDon’t wander on the roads of it and what’s and buts which this world teaches youSurrender yourself in me and I will guide youIntellect says: foolish are those who are true with their words and feelings, listen to me I teach you manipulation which in this world resides as a kingLove says: I will connect you with those who are meant to be in your life, even if manipulation is their game you will chose to be wise. I will reside in your heart and I will never let you lose your shineIntellect says: those who choose to listen to heart always dig there grave in frontOf shrine. Listen to me I stay in your mindLove smiled at intellect and said to him: without me you are nothing, if we choose to walk hand in hand we can create miracles which will be witnessed by divine. If only, you choose to drop your judgment. I can take you places which you can never imagine in this lifetime.I opened my eyes smiling This made me realized Love is the anecdote of all the darkness inside Which refuses to shine — with Donna Lee Foy Berthold and 33 others.