Sudarshan would like you to review his/her blog.
[ http://www.simplysud.com ] IndiRank: 25

looking for criticism, how to make it better?

Sudarshan
Sudarshan
from New Mumbai
12 years ago

It contains - a few poems, a few abstracts, one story, and mostly serious issues that plague the society.I cover the serious issues in general. I love writing about social issues as they are really close to my heart.

and I like to write aphorsisms/jokes so I wanted to know how can I incorporate them into the same website. I dont want to maintain a separate blog for just the small stuff.

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Sunil
Sunil
from Shimla
12 years ago

Hello Sudarshan,

I really liked your writing style, and the content is too good. My few suggestions are:

1. Images on front page: You front page looks all text. Better display some images on the front page too.

2. Popular posts: Rather than displaying a huge list of your latest articles, better display 4-5 most popular articles. You can use plugin for that.

3. For aphorsisms/jokes my advise would be to dedicate a day for them say Friday Fun, and post all the fun stuff on that day only.

Rest, your blog is super rocking.

Looking forward for your feedback on my blog too.

regards,

Sunil