Sandipon 'Torrun Frost' Choudhury would like you to review his/her blog.
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I would appreciate criticism and feedback for my blog, so people get on with it

I started this poetry blog as a measure to fight my melancholia which had set in because I had a heart break, but the blog started taking a different route away from sadness as I kept on getting normal and finally when I was all right (read when I started bird-watching again) I realized how much my blog had changed. So now I post poems based on many varied themes. Hope you have a good time roaming the bad-lands of my blog. And yeah do drop in a line or two if something you read affeted you on it.

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Shishir Kumar Prasad
Shishir Kumar Prasad
from Madison
12 years ago

Hey Sandipon,

Firstly, I loved the name of your blog. Very creative. While I am reading some of the entries of the blog, I would like to mention one thing about the presentation of your blog. If you see all your poems, you have presented them in double spaced lines and there seems to be no notion of stanzas. I think you realy need to change that. Make the lines in a stanza single-spaced and separate each stanza with double spaces. I don't know if you had a specific reason for that style of formatting, but to me that looks visually less appealing.

Cheers.

 

 

Hey thank you for the observation, much appreciated. The double spaced style, I use simply because it makes the post seem visually 'open' for me. The lack of any notion of stanza in them is another intentional thing I do, becuase I dont like the rigidty which is encompassed within the notion of paras and syntactical structures. This is my way of really making my posts personal in so much as I am making my own rules that won't force my creative capital to be restricted. Plus I already write in blank verse which requires that I give up the style of paragrah works,

But, thanks again for the criticism. Much apreciated Smile