"Please review my poetry blog"
The blog consists spiritual and touching poems!! They are the original work and have been written on my own experiences though, they've a universal appeal.
hi senora... I have been to yr poetry blog rather had seen couple of posts in all blogs.. somewhere i learnt you are comforable on criticism...so her i go...
1st impression: it looks like photoblog and rather your own foto album. your objective is not clear for the blog..you want readers to see u 1st and then read or vice versa..guess its the other way. you write well and i believe people will look for the author once they read this. you can have your pics secondary.
Overall Layout: looks too clumsy..with pics distributed every where..multiple pics for same post.... pics does not refelct the post... in a nutshell it reflects a confused atmosphere.. not a enjoyable environment to read...
your pics: your pics emphasises the beautiful n powerful eyes..looking at sky....why u looking at sky in all yr pics..what you are looking at?? a visitor is at your (blog) home...and you busy looking at sky.... take your pic..a bit from a distance...looking at camera.,..you loook beautiful dont worry staring at camera.. post one somehwere or make a post with smaller pic ..when clicked .....it would open big dont worry... ;-)
Remove that BIG pic on all your Blogs... make this blog beautiful like your posts. and thought...
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bby....and enjoy blogging
So sweet of you!! I really appreciate the straightforwardness and honesty of your statements!! I thought no one is so damn straight as i am......m sooooo impressed.....would be looking for some more wonderful criticism. And i accept my pics are giving a confusing atmosphere.....will improve my blog and update the awkward looks!! Once again, thank you soooo much!!!! :)
