kindly review my blog
The blog is about things that affect me,my views on my surroundings and my thoughts in general.
Any suggetions to improve it.
Thank you for the reply.
I visited your blog. Nice blog.
The content is good. My personal opinion is that the background can be done a shade lighter to emphasize what you write. Rest all is good.
best wishes,
Ira
Thanks, Ira! Noted!
I read your posts. I see an innnocense in your writings which can only be seen in a little girl. I do not know whether this a praise or a rebuke because when you write about serious issues like "crime against women" I do not know how you write. I humbly suggest you to write something in which the language gets a bit sharp.
Thank you for the suggestion. I will definitely try to write something where ' the language gets a bit sharp'.
Satire is a forte I like and often write, but somehow was reluctant to use. Now I would definitely publish those posts too. Be ready for another review.
