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Please Review My Poetry Blog!

Nirati
Nirati
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Teenage Babblings is my secondary blog, it is where I publish the poetry that I write. 

I'd really be grateful if you review it and tell me what changes need to be made, if any. :)

I recently checked & stats are low as hell. I would love your input/suggestions :)x 

Edited 12 years ago
Reason: I needed to add 2 lines!
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Nikhil Poddar
Nikhil Poddar
from Kolkata
13 years ago

Your blog is good. Just make sure you remove the vast empty space on the top.

On your poems, they are nicely written. If I could give you a tip - a poem is always better if it is in a straigh line like this ( the * means content) - 

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You see, all lines take the same amount of space. This makes your poem neater.

www.thenikiller.blogspot.com

Nirati
Nirati
from Mumbai
13 years ago

Oh oh okay, allright. Thank you soo much :)